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Farmer's Labour-Bt

The bend in his 
back will lend you
your food till end 



Date: 12/06/2020
Submitted for: Bauk Than-Than Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Charles Messina

February 15, 2021 at 9:45 PM

Well done, Anitha. Congrats on your win!

Mahtab Bangalee

December 10, 2020 at 1:39 AM

is it Than-Bauk? but followed not the appropriate form of Than-Bauk!- whatever expressis is good

Anitha Jayasankar

December 10, 2020 at 1:50 AM

Thank you Mahtab. No, this is reverse Than-Bauk, and for this contest, sponsor wants it this way of rhyming. Have a great day :)

John Watt

December 9, 2020 at 3:32 PM

Nice write, Ani. I like how this sympathizes with the hard labour of the farmer that allows us to eat. Best wishes in the BT contest ~ John

Anitha Jayasankar

December 10, 2020 at 1:53 AM

John, thank you so much and much appreciate your visit and comment. Truly John, if not for their hard work, our lives will not be this much comfortable. Have a great blessed day.. :)

Kim Rodrigues

December 8, 2020 at 7:21 PM

I like it!

Anitha Jayasankar

December 9, 2020 at 5:39 AM

Thank you so much Kim... Hugs :)

Newton Ranaweera

December 7, 2020 at 1:55 PM

Such a creative, witty paint, Anitha, with a great message!!

Anitha Jayasankar

December 9, 2020 at 5:38 AM

Thank you so much Newton. Have a great day :)

Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2020 at 9:59 AM

I believe that there are workers out there who through their hard work we have fresh food on our tables. Working in the fields is not easy for I have done it in our garden. It is hard, it is hot and it seems like it won't end when the season begins but it does. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

December 9, 2020 at 5:38 AM

Thank you so much Sara for your valuable comment.. yes their hardwork and toil is something to be much respected. Have a blessed day.. Hugs :)