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Farewell To Love

…….. ---------------//------ black winds bite empty endings spill in sewers, old vows wilt dissolving life's tenderness ` ` ` hearts sliced in rough stone rainfall parts breaths ravens wearing dying cloaks ` ` ` pale stardusts, farewell © copyright …………. Brinan Strand's Up to 14 By: nette onclaud

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/6/2014 9:07:00 PM

Nette This is a creative and unique write. Very well worded and put together. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2012 8:46:00 AM

Way to go girl..Congrats..Sara

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/25/2012 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations Nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 10:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette. Sorry to be late on comment. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/9/2011 4:53:00 AM

When there's nothing left to say.... you say it well. Congratulations Nette... luv Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2011 2:00:00 AM

way to go, nette. a Big congrats to you on your well deserved win. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2011 12:44:00 AM

NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2011 11:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, well done. Lee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/8/2011 8:40:00 PM

Congrad's..Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/8/2011 7:32:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest nette, great combination of three forms, imagery-rich as always :-)

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 10/8/2011 2:22:00 PM

Nette, awesome write! Congratulations on your wonderful win!---Lori

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2011 2:14:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) *hugs*

Cory Long

Date: 10/8/2011 1:57:00 PM

congrats on your win with this gem my friend.. free spirit

Tim B

Date: 10/7/2011 9:57:00 PM

Very emotive Mrs. Nette, a fine bitter quality to the bite of such things. Lovely wordplay and imagery as always, good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2011 4:08:00 PM

Very lovely series here, Nette. I hate missing out on so much Soup!! I just can't find time to be here with Joe not working right now. I sure hope he finds work soon! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2011 8:09:00 AM

Wishing you the very best in the contest dear Nette. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/3/2011 7:28:00 PM

didja know that the best way to keep folks away from something is to put a sign near it that says.... "DANGER! Radioactive Sewage"? The healing power of womankind is a beauty thing. Thanks, netteski! yo~N

Judy Ball

Date: 10/3/2011 6:19:00 PM

A super job here Nette. Very excellently done and cleverly strung together. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB

Daver Austin

Date: 10/3/2011 4:13:00 PM

This is quite bizarre, nette. A fine job of making loss seem arcane, mysterious.Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2011 3:36:00 PM

such deep expressive lines in short form ..potent and profound energy of emotion Nette luv.. well raining again making moving so much more challenging.. God bless my family who keep positive about it all... I am tired and exhausted but happy... sorry cannot read as much..by midnight when I usually do get on PS.. I am too tired to concentrate these days..oh..good luck in Russell's contest my friend..luv..