Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

Farewell To Love

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black winds bite
     empty endings spill
           in sewers,
               old vows wilt
                        dissolving life's tenderness ` ` `
                             hearts sliced in rough stone


                              
          rainfall parts breaths
             ravens wearing dying  cloaks ` ` `
                        pale stardusts, farewell




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Brinan Strand's Up to 14
By: nette onclaud

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Robin Davis May 6, 2014 at 9:07 PM Nette This is a creative and unique write. Very well worded and put together. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2012 at 8:46 AM Way to go girl..Congrats..Sara

Bob Quigley January 25, 2012 at 8:58 AM Congratulations Nette

Carol Sunshine Brown January 25, 2012 at 6:07 AM Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown October 13, 2011 at 10:22 AM Congratulations on your win Nette. Sorry to be late on comment. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster October 9, 2011 at 4:53 AM When there's nothing left to say.... you say it well. Congratulations Nette... luv Margaret

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2011 at 2:00 AM way to go, nette. a Big congrats to you on your well deserved win. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2011 at 12:44 AM NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Lee Ramage October 8, 2011 at 11:35 PM Congrats on your win, well done. Lee

Debbie Guzzi October 8, 2011 at 8:40 PM Congrad's..Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot October 8, 2011 at 7:32 PM congrats on your win in the contest nette, great combination of three forms, imagery-rich as always :-)

Lori Lucas Mcclure October 8, 2011 at 2:22 PM Nette, awesome write! Congratulations on your wonderful win!---Lori

Wilma Neels October 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM Nette, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) *hugs*

Cory Long October 8, 2011 at 1:57 PM congrats on your win with this gem my friend.. free spirit

Tim B October 7, 2011 at 9:57 PM Very emotive Mrs. Nette, a fine bitter quality to the bite of such things. Lovely wordplay and imagery as always, good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2011 at 4:08 PM Very lovely series here, Nette. I hate missing out on so much Soup!! I just can't find time to be here with Joe not working right now. I sure hope he finds work soon! LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2011 at 8:09 AM Wishing you the very best in the contest dear Nette. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones October 3, 2011 at 7:28 PM didja know that the best way to keep folks away from something is to put a sign near it that says.... "DANGER! Radioactive Sewage"? The healing power of womankind is a beauty thing. Thanks, netteski! yo~N

Judy Ball October 3, 2011 at 6:19 PM A super job here Nette. Very excellently done and cleverly strung together. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB

Daver Austin October 3, 2011 at 4:13 PM This is quite bizarre, nette. A fine job of making loss seem arcane, mysterious.Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2011 at 3:36 PM such deep expressive lines in short form ..potent and profound energy of emotion Nette luv.. well raining again making moving so much more challenging.. God bless my family who keep positive about it all... I am tired and exhausted but happy... sorry cannot read as much..by midnight when I usually do get on PS.. I am too tired to concentrate these days..oh..good luck in Russell's contest my friend..luv..