Farewell Mr Brown

A day to Mata's  birthday 
We went as usual on our funny trip 
Mum had sent us to get somethings  for her 
Just a little down the road,  near Mr Brown's garden 

'It's 4 p.m, Mr Brown's shoe will be out by now'
I told Mata giggling 
Lo... Mr  Brown's shoe wasn't on his old blue car 
And Mr Brown wasn't in the garden 

Behold Mr Brown is gone
'Gone to meet his wife'
Mrs Beam his neighbour said tearfully 
Gone is our daily sweet rose 

But Mr Brown didn't leave without dropping a note 
To Billy, his loyal dog,  Who came to deliver 
'To Mata and Mary,  thanks for your constant visit'
With the note was our final rose from Mr Brown 

Slowly,  without wide smile 
Without hard giggle
We walked to where we knew he would be laid
Laid beside Mrs Brown was Mr Brown 

Our very good old friend 
And written on his tomb was 
     BEN BROWN 
      (1929-2009)
      A great gardener, a Faithful Husband. 

Slowly, we dropped our last gift from Mr Brown 
His usual but final sweet Red Rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/20/2017 8:34:00 AM
- He will be reminded - A lovely poem, Abosede - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 1/31/2017 2:30:00 AM
Thanks Anne -Lise.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 1/31/2017 2:30:00 AM
Thanks Anne -Lise.
Date: 1/14/2017 7:27:00 AM
I'm touched by the content of this poem, especially the contrast between the earlier giggling (in previous poem) and the serious mood of this one. Regards // paul
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 1/31/2017 2:28:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely comments Paul, I really appreciate them.
Date: 1/12/2017 8:34:00 PM
This is such a sweet tribute to this loving couple, Abosede!! I enjoyed it.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 1/31/2017 2:22:00 AM
Thanks Andrea ...glad you liked it.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 1/31/2017 2:22:00 AM
Thanks Andrea ...glad you liked it.
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