Farewell Filigree

~     window between us,


               your breath freezes like fine lace ...


          goodbye's frigid fringe     ~

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Gershon Wolf

December 24, 2018 at 9:43 PM

The excellence and precision of the imagery in this Haiku is chilling---and compelling. Bravo! Holiday Happiness! ~ Gershon (soupmail)

Vladislav Raven

December 23, 2018 at 6:46 PM

Hi Gregory, an excellent Haiku my friend. Has to be a fave. Good luck in the contest. reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Christmas Eve....Mike.