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Image result for breath frozen glass



~     window between us,


               your breath freezes like fine lace ...


          goodbye's frigid fringe     ~





Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/24/2018 9:43:00 PM
The excellence and precision of the imagery in this Haiku is chilling---and compelling. Bravo! Holiday Happiness! ~ Gershon (soupmail)
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Date: 12/23/2018 6:46:00 PM
Hi Gregory, an excellent Haiku my friend. Has to be a fave. Good luck in the contest. reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Christmas Eve....Mike.
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Date: 12/23/2018 5:07:00 AM
Seriously I just caught a chill. Excellent. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/23/2018 3:35:00 AM
its lovely breathing connection// good writings
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