Farewell Filigree

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~ window between us, your breath freezes like fine lace ... goodbye's frigid fringe ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/24/2018 9:43:00 PM

The excellence and precision of the imagery in this Haiku is chilling---and compelling. Bravo! Holiday Happiness! ~ Gershon (soupmail)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/23/2018 6:46:00 PM

Hi Gregory, an excellent Haiku my friend. Has to be a fave. Good luck in the contest. reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Christmas Eve....Mike.

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/23/2018 5:07:00 AM

Seriously I just caught a chill. Excellent. Good luck in the contest.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/23/2018 3:35:00 AM

its lovely breathing connection// good writings