Farewell

In the morning, I wake Looking to my side only to see Your rattle you didn’t take For your soul has left this world for eternity Don’t fear or quake For you’re under the protection of the Almighty

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 8/15/2024 2:46:00 AM

Sounds like SIDS sadness baby dies in their sleep very sad write blessings.

Thawra Ali
Date: 8/25/2024 11:46:00 AM

The world's like that unfortunately; it's not always happy moments. I appreciate your comment.

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/14/2024 6:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Thawra Ali
Date: 8/25/2024 11:43:00 AM

You're welcome. I appreciate your nice welcoming.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/11/2024 8:48:00 AM

Very sad, Ali, yet we must bow down and accept the will of God

Thawra Ali
Date: 8/25/2024 11:38:00 AM

Amen