Kiran Bantawa Poet Rhyme

Faraway My Angel Awaits - a Wish

Faraway my angel awaits
With garland of white flower ;
May there be no hindrances
When I set out for her.

Faraway my angel awaits
With roses in her hands ;
May there be no disturbances
When I set off from the sands.

Faraway my angel awaits
With love in her heart ;
May there be no sorrow
When I'll play my part.

Faraway my angel awaits
With a smile on her lips ;
May there be no bereavement
When we both embark to ships.

Faraway my angel awaits
With dreams in her eyes ;
And may our story be never fade
When we both have died. 





Note: 
(I work abroad, I miss my girl. 
I still remember her words "I'll 
wait for you" before leaving on 
a jet 
plane. I constantly wish May 
there be no hindrances 
between us. this is a poem 
dedicated to her- "May our 
love be never fade & May this 
distance never create any 
trouble. I love you and I miss 
you." )

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Robin Davis November 5, 2013 at 11:32 PM This is a lovely tribute to someone very special to your heart. The reader can feel the devotion and care in every line. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my poem. I appreciate it Kiran Bantawa November 16, 2013 at 7:49 AM I also appreciate it. thank you.

Skat A October 13, 2013 at 9:30 PM well done..............SKAT Kiran Bantawa October 13, 2013 at 9:59 PM thank you.

Sara Kendrick October 11, 2013 at 5:25 PM Separation from a loved one is a time of sadness..Great winning entry.Congrats..Sara Kiran Bantawa October 13, 2013 at 9:59 PM thank you Sara.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 11, 2013 at 10:07 AM Kiran, Congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! Enjoyed reading again...love and blessings, Rhonda Kiran Bantawa October 13, 2013 at 10:00 PM thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 8:48 PM Kiran, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA Kiran Bantawa October 10, 2013 at 10:19 PM thanks Linda.

Sandra Adams October 7, 2013 at 8:33 PM gorgeous poem...congrats on your win Kiran Bantawa October 10, 2013 at 10:18 PM thanks Sandra.

Debbie Guzzi October 7, 2013 at 7:43 PM May you both always be this much in love. Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love Kiran Bantawa October 7, 2013 at 8:24 PM thank you for that.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu October 6, 2013 at 7:47 PM Wow! That's awesome dear,I say amen to your prayer and wish! Well penned and she will be proud of you when she reads your piece. Kudos! Baron Of Ebullion Kiran Bantawa October 10, 2013 at 10:18 PM thanks for your lovely comment and prayers. Kiran Bantawa October 7, 2013 at 8:25 PM thank you.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 4, 2013 at 8:51 PM A beautiful dedication, Kiran! I wish the two of you all the best. Love and blessings, Rhonda Kiran Bantawa October 4, 2013 at 9:02 PM thank you for your love and blessings Rhonda.