Liam Mcdaid Poet Narrative

Faraway Dream

Thorns tearing as a soul cries out 
For a magic star to appear in the Heavens
Lost in the silver of the moon face 
alone inside a chandelier 
star lighting crystals a rainbow of love
In each teardrop one star falls
Within thoughts dust a trail 
falling water sparkling over jewels glistening 
in each and every wish granted
Shimmering silver treasure 
falling in love you are so beautiful 
sweetly beyond this world and the next 
Twinkling behind dazzling sparkles
jewels of everlasting happiness
bliss will be the joy it brings 
in never ending beauty sings 
Each a warm fluttering inside wings
blushing ruby red lips kissing desire 
deeply turning keys passion hotly breathes
Warm with a fire burning bright
flames openly embracing you love
softly and tenderly sighs sweetly
Touching this dream a gentle warm glow
holding the heart open 
to one stunning beauty of a queen

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Timothy Hicks January 5, 2015 at 2:02 AM In each teardrop one star falls Within thoughts dust a trail... that was my favorite part of this piece. There's something profound about of our own thoughts making a path of their own accord. Powerful poem! Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 3:28 PM timothy smiling yeah our thoughts draw a path all by themselves at times thank you so kindly dear friend for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

Maurice Yvonne December 18, 2014 at 4:52 PM Excellent, beautifully romantic. Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 11:27 AM maurice your a pal thank you deeply dear friend wonderful heartfelt comment have a great weekend

M. L. Kiser December 18, 2014 at 3:56 PM That was absolutely beautiful. Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 11:23 AM thank you dear friend wonderful comment have a great weekend

Charmaine Chircop December 18, 2014 at 2:23 PM Exceptional !!!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2014 at 2:50 AM - Dear Liam, this is a warm and beautiful poem from you - Romantic and soft that only you can write - Really enjoy reading this along with my morning coffee - I wish you a great day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 11:01 AM anne lise thank you dear friend for the kind very beautiful comment deeply appreciated have a great weekend pal

Shadow Hamilton December 18, 2014 at 2:39 AM so vivid an image painted Liam dear friend very poignant hugs 7 + fav Liam Mcdaid December 19, 2014 at 10:59 AM linda dear pal thank you for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a great weekend

Dorian Petersen Potter December 18, 2014 at 12:15 AM Just dazzling! Another very beautiful romantic love poem, Liam. A 7 +++for you! This is indeed a very sweet, beautiful and tender poem to be held close to ones heart, my dearest friend. You're Pen is very sparkling Golden! May you feel the presence and warmth of God and His Angels protecting you and giving you all their love and strength. Keep the faith and protect your dreams! I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very lovely day, and God bless you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxox D. Liam Mcdaid December 18, 2014 at 9:50 AM thank you dorian dear friend deeply beautiful comment a happy christmas also to you and your family bless you

Cherl Dunn December 17, 2014 at 6:31 PM Dear Liam, What an excellent image you put out here, It's nicely written, cheri Liam Mcdaid December 17, 2014 at 6:44 PM thank you so kindly cheryl dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you