Far, Far Away

Far, far away
In the sunshine
Where light play
Are my highest aspirations
I may not reach them
But I can look up
Believe in them
And see beautiful creations
That are my life`s foundations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Zerbst Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Surely, I think people admire those that do not quit, not merely those that accomplish their goals. Beautiful picture in this poem.
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October 19, 2012 at 3:41 AM
‡ Returning Unto Your Sweet Lovely Beauty, Beautiful Vesna, To Say 'Thank You' For Your Kind Visit. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡
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October 18, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Amazing work! Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:33 PM
this contains some very lovely thoughts. Very enjoyable poem.
Williams Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Vesna it's good to have ambitions...David
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Very moving spiritually uplifting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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October 18, 2012 at 12:32 AM
Thank you, Rachel.
St.Cross Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 10:47 PM
‡ I'm Tired Vessie. You Look Sooo Beautiful Tonight. You Voice Is Tenderly Sweet. Always Your Poetry Is Sooo Pretty. Keep Building, Sweet Beautiful Girl. Kisses And Hugs With Love, Rachel ‡
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