Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Far Fair This Ride

Much like this ride, I'll walk the endless course

As seen among wayfarers’ eyes dark gold

where swallows reel above to reinforce

the edge of night, far fair, I do behold.



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Rithimus Divisa 6 Contest
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden
Originally posted 10/ 25/ 2018
Resubmitted 9/ 22/ 2020
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Sara Kendrick October 15, 2020 at 7:56 AM Creative contest entry. Way to go with this winner. SK

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2020 at 10:55 AM an utter gem, Nette! Big congrats to you in Greg's contest.

Susan Ashley September 25, 2020 at 7:09 PM It's a pleasure to return with a big round of applause, Nette. Congratulations on your excellent win with this inspiring gem. Warmest wishes, dear poetess, enjoy your win! ~Susan

Laura Leiser September 25, 2020 at 7:08 PM Love the idea of the wayfarer walking an endless course, Nette. Enjoyed this one! Congrats on your win! :)

Gregory Richard Barden September 25, 2020 at 6:47 PM Congratulations on your win in the Rithimus Divisa 6 Premiere Poetry Contest, Nette - I appreciate you taking the time to enter. This was a contest full of quality, and the placements came down to very small things, indeed - what a joy to read such poetic cream! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2020 at 10:39 AM I think this poem is awesome, a wonderful idea to re-post it for the contest. you sound like a female Shakespeare sometimes dear Nette, especially this poem. Good luck my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joanna Daniel September 23, 2020 at 11:36 PM Great lines you got here, Nette:)

Susan Ashley September 23, 2020 at 4:38 PM Beguiling beauty spills with effortless delicacy from your gifted pen, Nette. Exquisite and elegant. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2020 at 12:33 PM Lovely stanza you chose for the contest--all the best, Nette,

Sam Kauffman September 23, 2020 at 12:25 PM Evocative, Nette, with layers of depth. Best wishes for the contest. I think Gregory will really like this write.

Tom Cunningham September 23, 2020 at 7:05 AM A verse in its own right Nette, good luck in the contest. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2020 at 5:58 AM - A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Why have you posted your poem "WILLOW" three times? - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Nette Onclaud September 24, 2020 at 2:16 PM Anne, no internet for days..just using my celphone and it created 3 samecooms!...thanka