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Far Away Dad

A close connection to each other Valued time is spent each day, A young boy and his father Its ment to be this way. What will happen to this When the mother decides to go, The child is taken away now New where abouts he dont know. A father's heart is now shattered For what is there left to do, Without his precious son there His life is meaningless and blue. Wanting only to be the best ever He sits in a cell thinking what he had, Missing his son and new memories His son is missing more....his dad. Even the miles between them Can't take what is in the heart, Knowing they will soon reunite Will help them while their apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/25/2008 2:36:00 PM
This is so sad....especially the cell part....mistakes can be valuable lessons if we learn from them....my prayers for you, and your precious family.....always, Christy
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Date: 12/25/2008 1:01:00 PM
Heart punching poem. I love the flow of the write and how the theme traveled from stanza to stanza. Great write.
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