Far Away

far away awaits
follow season's longer days
river flows to north

junewaterhaiku

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Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:06 AM

Wonderful haiku. congrats on the win

D.W. Rodgers

August 21, 2014 at 6:51 AM

Thanks Dr. Mehta

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 10:07 PM

Congrats on a fine win!!!

D.W. Rodgers

August 21, 2014 at 6:51 AM

Thanks Robert

Casarah Nance

August 20, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Beautiful Haiku Dave, grats on your win :)

D.W. Rodgers

August 21, 2014 at 6:51 AM

Thanks Casarah

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 7:20 PM

Unique take to the theme...congrats

D.W. Rodgers

August 20, 2014 at 7:48 PM

Thanks Tim, yes it is interesting how many takes there were to this.

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:13 PM

NICE! Congrats for your win.

D.W. Rodgers

August 20, 2014 at 3:16 PM

Thanks Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:34 AM

Aberfoyle, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

D.W. Rodgers

August 20, 2014 at 12:10 PM

Thanks Linda, and thank you for a most interesting contest,. I going through your blog, I was most impressed by the quality and variety of takes on the topic.