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3/12/2025 for Write Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Gazing into the sky so far, where five points twinkle from a star, there's more than a spark. The feeling lingers, as I sit close to where you are, and hold hands with all five fingers.

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Date: 3/15/2025 2:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, David :) - hugs
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Date: 3/15/2025 2:44:00 AM
high five! congratulations on your win dear poet.cheers!!!
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Date: 3/12/2025 5:22:00 PM
The 5 point of a star resemble fingers. I like this unusual concept. There is deep thought here.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/12/2025 5:39:00 PM
haha, thanks for giving me credit for that Hilda - lol!
Date: 3/12/2025 12:31:00 PM
Nice!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/12/2025 5:39:00 PM
Thanks Kim!

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