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3/12/2025 for Write Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Far and Near

Gazing into the sky so far,
where five points twinkle from a star,
there's more than a spark.  The feeling lingers,
as I sit close to where you are,
and hold hands with all five fingers.
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Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:46 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, David :) - hugs
mysore Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:44 AM
high five! congratulations on your win dear poet.cheers!!!
Greenhough Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 5:22 PM
The 5 point of a star resemble fingers. I like this unusual concept. There is deep thought here.
Crandall Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 5:39 PM
haha, thanks for giving me credit for that Hilda - lol!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Nice!
Crandall Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Thanks Kim!
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