Jennifer Proxenos Poet Rhyme

FANTASY LAND

Oh fantasy land,
fairy joy, hand in hand,
Sunflower, bathing in sun,
Delighting Clara,
Who'd tell mama,
Would you like to join us in the fun.

Chase dragonflies, play
With fantasy all day,
Of this always have plenty,
Sit with my fairy,
On leaves hairy
That tickle, fairies lure me gently.

Poetry Contest: You Live In a Fantasy World
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Date: 05/12/2024


Placed 1st in contest

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Sara Kendrick December 13, 2024 at 5:48 AM Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2024 at 4:22 AM - Congratulations on your win, dear Jenny :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith December 12, 2024 at 8:56 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute write again with a great last line... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Duke Beaufort December 9, 2024 at 1:43 PM Jennifer, It sounds good at least for a while. I think some of us would welcome a challenge too! lol!!! However, some time at peace and with serenity can make the day very pleasant!! Smiles!

Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2024 at 9:46 AM What a fun write. Great Ending... "Good Luck"  Have a fun day writing away..................

Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2024 at 6:36 AM - A sweet fantasy land, dear Jenny :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Sotto Poet December 5, 2024 at 6:07 AM Jennifer, you composed such wonderful poetry on childhood's quirky and creative world, when fantasy and nature combine to produce a joyous and carefree experience. It emphasizes the purity and satisfaction found in simple pleasures like playing with imaginary companions and admiring the beauty of nature. Best wishes for the contest

Tom Cunningham December 5, 2024 at 3:07 AM Oh to be young again Jennifer, shame we have to grow up. Good luck in the contest. Tom