FANTASY LAND

Oh fantasy land,
fairy joy, hand in hand,
Sunflower, bathing in sun,
Delighting Clara,
Who'd tell mama,
Would you like to join us in the fun.

Chase dragonflies, play
With fantasy all day,
Of this always have plenty,
Sit with my fairy,
On leaves hairy
That tickle, fairies lure me gently.

Poetry Contest: You Live In a Fantasy World
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Date: 05/12/2024


Placed 1st in contest

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Date: 12/13/2024 5:48:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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Date: 12/13/2024 4:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, dear Jenny :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Date: 12/12/2024 8:56:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute write again with a great last line... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Date: 12/9/2024 1:43:00 PM
Jennifer, It sounds good at least for a while. I think some of us would welcome a challenge too! lol!!! However, some time at peace and with serenity can make the day very pleasant!! Smiles!
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Date: 12/5/2024 9:46:00 AM
What a fun write. Great Ending... "Good Luck"  Have a fun day writing away..................
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Date: 12/5/2024 6:36:00 AM
- A sweet fantasy land, dear Jenny :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/5/2024 6:07:00 AM
Jennifer, you composed such wonderful poetry on childhood's quirky and creative world, when fantasy and nature combine to produce a joyous and carefree experience. It emphasizes the purity and satisfaction found in simple pleasures like playing with imaginary companions and admiring the beauty of nature. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 12/5/2024 3:07:00 AM
Oh to be young again Jennifer, shame we have to grow up. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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