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Fantasy Land

fantasy land i live in a fantasy land where i have it all sorted out my mother's hand and a green porch with flower bands lying around in a summer haze it all makes sense until darkness arrives and it all becomes a mess my touch became fatal due to which the flowers wither the fantasy land turns mortal which i had dreamed to make bigger peered through an ordinary keyhole misunderstood it as a person which i can't even freehold to heal a heart which is quite uncertain now put an end to a fantasy land it doesn't exist nor is it in fate it just doesn't subsist

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Date: 6/2/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/30/2023 4:38:00 AM
Nice one, Anushka. I think we all find fantasy lands in our minds.
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Anushka Vaz
Date: 5/30/2023 4:39:00 AM
Thank you!

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