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Fantastic Sky

Gray rippled clouds create a tenebrous day A gentle easterly breeze cools it down But that sun, glorious sun Creates a red rose crown There is a chill upon the air A dampness makes it cling As a water sprinkler's sound Upon my heart and soul rings Changes in the sky happen Seems time speeds by The horizon now full of color No traffic, but sprinkle noise~sight The color from the crepe myrtle Comes alive, brought back by the light Delight they offer to passersby Against the fantastic sky of such height
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Love the entrance of the crepe myrtle in its enlivening color! Ahh…
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the nice comments on my work. Your visit is always so encouraging. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 8:55 AM
The world goes round and vistas change with each small movement.
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Yes, each morning is so special and different. Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 10:20 PM
Every day the sky gives us a new picture forever changing. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 1:54 AM
Yes, Tom. Some people see it as routine, nothing special, but I see each one as special. God gives us something every day to enjoy if we only are in tune with our surroundings. Sara K
One Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Yes you are right in your description of the horizons.. lovey words here and imagery so vivid..
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:08 PM
SO, wonderful that you would think my words and imagery are good. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 11:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your "fantastic sky" write. What a great picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest...  Have a wonderful day writing away................
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Thank you, Paula. Not for a contest as of this minute. LOL..Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
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