Fantastic Sky

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Gray rippled clouds create a tenebrous day A gentle easterly breeze cools it down But that sun, glorious sun Creates a red rose crown There is a chill upon the air A dampness makes it cling As a water sprinkler's sound Upon my heart and soul rings Changes in the sky happen Seems time speeds by The horizon now full of color No traffic, but sprinkle noise~sight The color from the crepe myrtle Comes alive, brought back by the light Delight they offer to passersby Against the fantastic sky of such height

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2024 4:37:00 AM

Love the entrance of the crepe myrtle in its enlivening color! Ahh…

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/29/2024 4:54:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the nice comments on my work. Your visit is always so encouraging. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2024 8:55:00 AM

The world goes round and vistas change with each small movement.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/28/2024 1:42:00 PM

Yes, each morning is so special and different. Thanks for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/26/2024 10:20:00 PM

Every day the sky gives us a new picture forever changing. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/27/2024 1:54:00 AM

Yes, Tom. Some people see it as routine, nothing special, but I see each one as special. God gives us something every day to enjoy if we only are in tune with our surroundings. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2024 12:00:00 PM

Yes you are right in your description of the horizons.. lovey words here and imagery so vivid..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/26/2024 12:08:00 PM

SO, wonderful that you would think my words and imagery are good. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/26/2024 11:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "fantastic sky" write. What a great picture. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a wonderful day writing away................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/26/2024 12:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Not for a contest as of this minute. LOL..Your visits are uplifting. Sara K