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Fantastic Fantasy

Fantastic Fantasy Two third part of Earth Flooded by ancient sea Was Aqua Ocean Life started in sea Evolution was going Fishes were evolving Fantastic species Fish with tail raised human head Was termed Humanish Above waist human Below waist shiny scaly fish tail Swam propelling two hands Merman was male version Better half was known Mermaid Humanish cheered Ages were passing More evolution went on Tail transformed to legs First male child was born To a Merman-Mermaid couple Boy is named Adam Baby girl is born To second Humanish couple Girl is named as Eve Children swam at sea Both walked and played on sea shore First Man and Woman Adam Eve formed couple They left sea, settled on land Eden Garden chosen They plucked a red apple Eve ate half, hid behind tree Adam took rest half Both attained wisdom Eve wore leaf string with clams, pearls Adam put a twig 11/15/15 For Contest Fantasy Fish in A Fantasy Ocean third place Sponsor Julia Ward

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Date: 12/7/2015 6:25:00 PM
A great Tail of a Tale :) well done.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thanks Casarah. AnishaD
Date: 12/7/2015 3:27:00 PM
A clever write, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Love. Anisha
Date: 12/7/2015 11:02:00 AM
A great if fishy tale - congrats on your win
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation. nisha D
Date: 12/7/2015 10:15:00 AM
wonderful take on the contest theme....~7~congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thanks for appreciation. Anisha D
Date: 12/7/2015 12:17:00 AM
What a lovely write Anisha.. congrats on big win!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:48:00 AM
Thanks. Love. Anisha d
Date: 12/6/2015 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful fantasy write, Anisha,!!!!! Congratulations on your win !:)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Actually You are the first one to appreciate me as I joined Soup four months back. So your appreciation means me a lot.
Date: 12/6/2015 12:36:00 PM
I thought this was awesome! Very creative and planned. Syllables off just a bit but easily fixable. Congrats on 3rd place!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:54:00 AM
May be. I was not so particular. Any way thanks a lot. Best wishes Susan. Anisha D
Date: 12/6/2015 11:30:00 AM
Anisha, a wonderful win. SKAT
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thank you SKAT
Date: 12/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
Anisha, Congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest! -Lu *smiles*
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thank you. Love. Ansha D
Date: 12/6/2015 11:09:00 AM
It wasn't strictly Haiku form, but I wasn't making form an absolute marker in this contest. You won because of the poem's imaginative content. Well done! Julia, :)
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:25:00 PM
thank you Julia for your kind consideration. Anisha d