Fantastic Fantasy

Fantastic Fantasy

                            Two third part of Earth
                          Flooded by ancient sea
                                Was Aqua Ocean
                                                             Life started in sea
                                                         Evolution was going
                                                            Fishes were evolving

                Fantastic species
               Fish with tail raised human head
               Was termed Humanish

                                                              Above waist human
                                                        Below waist shiny scaly fish tail
                                                          Swam propelling two hands

           Merman was male version
           Better half was known Mermaid
           Humanish cheered

                                                          Ages were passing
                                                       More evolution went on 
                                                         Tail transformed to legs
          First male child was born
             To a Merman-Mermaid couple
                     Boy is named Adam

                                                              Baby girl is born
                                                   To second Humanish couple
                                                            Girl is named as Eve

         Children swam at sea
         Both walked and played on sea shore
                First Man and Woman

                                                                  Adam Eve formed couple
                                                          They left sea, settled on land
                                                                     Eden Garden chosen

              They plucked a red apple
             Eve ate half, hid behind tree
                         Adam took rest half

                                                                 Both attained wisdom
                                                  Eve wore leaf string with clams, pearls
                                                              Adam put a twig
  
  11/15/15
For Contest
  Fantasy Fish in A Fantasy Ocean   third place
  Sponsor Julia Ward

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/7/2015 6:25:00 PM
A great Tail of a Tale :) well done.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thanks Casarah. AnishaD
Date: 12/7/2015 3:27:00 PM
A clever write, Anisha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Love. Anisha
Date: 12/7/2015 11:02:00 AM
A great if fishy tale - congrats on your win
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks for your appreciation. nisha D
Date: 12/7/2015 10:15:00 AM
wonderful take on the contest theme....~7~congrats on the win
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thanks for appreciation. Anisha D
Date: 12/7/2015 12:17:00 AM
What a lovely write Anisha.. congrats on big win!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:48:00 AM
Thanks. Love. Anisha d
Date: 12/6/2015 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful fantasy write, Anisha,!!!!! Congratulations on your win !:)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:52:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Actually You are the first one to appreciate me as I joined Soup four months back. So your appreciation means me a lot.
Date: 12/6/2015 12:36:00 PM
I thought this was awesome! Very creative and planned. Syllables off just a bit but easily fixable. Congrats on 3rd place!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/8/2015 12:54:00 AM
May be. I was not so particular. Any way thanks a lot. Best wishes Susan. Anisha D
Date: 12/6/2015 11:30:00 AM
Anisha, a wonderful win. SKAT
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thank you SKAT
Date: 12/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
Anisha, Congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest! -Lu *smiles*
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thank you. Love. Ansha D
Date: 12/6/2015 11:09:00 AM
It wasn't strictly Haiku form, but I wasn't making form an absolute marker in this contest. You won because of the poem's imaginative content. Well done! Julia, :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/6/2015 12:25:00 PM
thank you Julia for your kind consideration. Anisha d
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