Fantastic Dreams of Simple Minds

Oh, the longings of a heart
                  Still waiting for romance to start
Such youthful whims and teenage dreams
                 They haunt my memory, it seems

Though cars and clothes in dancing beat
                   distracted from l’amour’s defeat
I knew they’d never ease the void
                of urgent dreams yet unemployed

To love and be loved for all time
                         the requisite for life sublime
And so I persevered and found 
             The heart to which my love is bound
 
Though many years have furthered by
                                 Emotions only magnify
So I recall as life rewinds
                 Fantastic dreams of simple minds

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Date: 7/8/2020 5:48:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, Sometimes i get the sme dream in a row. I try to figure out what it means. Enjoy your evening my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2020 6:18:00 PM
Hello Mike, I hope you had a good spent. You are so welcome. Enjoy your evenig my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Darlene xxoo
Date: 7/6/2020 3:42:00 PM
This is wonderful to read Mike! Love the title/ending. Happy Monday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/6/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, Happy Monday xxoo
Date: 7/5/2020 7:02:00 PM
I just love that phrase, 'fantastic dreams of simple minds' --- really sums up the high school experience, Mike! Great stuff! Happy Sunday, and stay cool! Cheers, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/6/2020 6:29:00 AM
Cheers to you GW, and thank you. Happy Monday !!!
Date: 7/4/2020 4:04:00 PM
Some dreams are unattainable but we still dream and some stay with us forever...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/4/2020 6:30:00 PM
And some come true! Those are my favorites!! Happy Saturday Silent One!!!
Date: 7/3/2020 1:03:00 PM
- Important things to keep in your backpack, Mike - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/3/2020 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 7/2/2020 12:04:00 PM
The memories of those dreams stay with us forever Mike. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2020 1:43:00 PM
Yes, they surely do, tom. Thanks so much !
Date: 7/2/2020 8:47:00 AM
Lovely flow of your rhymes--rhythm of your poem enchants longings of heart--beautifully done, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, Happy Thursday !!
Date: 7/2/2020 6:38:00 AM
Wonderfully written. Bless you
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/2/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Regina!!!
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