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Famous Last Words

It's very beautiful over there My own life I cannot bear I cannot sleep, don't let me fall You're right, it's time, I love you all I am going away tonight This crushing weight I cannot fight My own sorrow was my own downfall Somehow, you said them all

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Date: 11/3/2016 7:42:00 PM
Avery, you have a wonderful gift. Not just anybody can sit down and put their feelings in poetry. It obviously comes easy to you. You have been blessed with a ticket to the future. It would be great to see you become a famous writer. It is something to be proud of.
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