Famine

The sinking sun is now undone, 
                       the sky is fading red
and shadows prowl neath cloak and cowl
                       for midnight lies ahead.

Beyond the heap, the honchos sleep 
                       with bloated bellies fed;
for, yes indeed, no one's in need,
                       at least, that's what they've said.

Amongst the ones that hunger shuns,
                       in day's retreating tread,
are spiders black ensnaring snacks
                       while spinning silken thread.

But as it stands, in conquered lands
                       a famine reigns instead
where kids at noon, collapse and swoon
                       on stones they call a bed.

With aching eyes they fantasize 
                       and dream of gingerbread,
and after while, they wake and smile,
                       now dining with the dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:57 AM
tracking back, not disappointed, this to the point, and says it as it is....poetry and the message does not get much better than this...
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Wow, what a poem. This is an incredible poem Terry. So well written and so profound. I always look forward to reading a new poem of yours. New to me at least.
Sullivan Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Hi Terry, really enjoyed reading this, awesome xx <3
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Congrats on your win with this incredible write! I'm surprised it didn't place higher. I love it! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Congrats, Terry. Outstanding. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations Terry. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations Terry well done like it xx
Bauer Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 4:06 AM
very powerful! congrats on your win!
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 3:52 AM
Terry congrats on your win..David
Collins Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Edgar Allen Poe-ish and all too real.
Susan Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 1:26 PM
now they face the anguish of living! good reminder that famine still exists
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 7:26 PM
oh, my, what stark imagery for famine. VERY good writing, Terry.
Deeks Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 5:26 PM
Hi terry.. this is truly heartbreaking... I understand some of the history but your write just embraces the whole picture... a mighty fine write indeed ... the spider hiding its silver thread speaks volumes,,,,I can only say how disgusted i am in certain parts of our (uk) history... karen
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May 31, 2012 at 3:39 AM
Well done Terry - quality! - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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