Family Meeting

The dreaded day of the family meeting arrived
Elder planning, liquidating assets and dispersing 84 years of belongings

Excuses, postponing, manipulations, whining and reasonings--
Valid each and present

Partners in crime, codependent family structure with high disfunctional
communicaton skills, L-O-V-E spelled out many times like the sword of truth
and breastplate of righteousness. 

Words were pitched and hurled then stroked like a fine persian cat with silken fur.
At the end of the day, with the word pile left in the floor like discarded dung; I 
tucked my tail and departed. I hope against all odds that tomorrow will be a better 
day and the grim reality of lost freedom will be swallowed with honey and accepted. 
Instead of preparing for battle with gloves and sword. Until the stretched car takes 
you away, be peaceful my love, L-O-V-E, spelled with emphasis on the OH OH.
My freedom is going quickly, along with my parents freedoms to chose and plan, 

I will become responsible to see they get a bath, meals, medical care and to the 

store. Will I have time for me?

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the lord my words to sweep
Away from the bitter heep
I pray the lord my heart to keep!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/20/2010 6:43:00 AM
There is a reversal of roles between parents and children as the years go by. Luckily, my father lived a long time but never required our assistance. Some people with much younger parents are already taking care of them. Your faith will carry you through this, Doris. Wonderful poem that really stirs the emotions. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:00:00 AM
The dreaded family meeting Doris, you wrote this so well I felt like an audience member while this scene played out.. Hope you are enjoying your weekend :) Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:42:00 PM
Doris, it would be hard for me to part with the things being brought up in your meeting. L-O-V-E will get you passing through when your heart is in the right place. I truly enjoyed the way you posted all them emotions one can think of when life is about to take a toll. God, will bless your heart double, giving you the ability and strenght to find fredom in all you do. I wish I could do more for my parents. Bye, Doris,..p.d.
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Date: 10/19/2010 1:14:00 PM
Wow a family pow wow ..sounds awesome Doris and u need lots of strength to tackle the outcome ... enjoyed the way u wrote this piece luv..
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:49:00 AM
I thought that I commented on this one..I hope that this is about the in-laws...Maybe God will come or your father and I will just die quietly in our sleep and then the children can try to figure out what to do with wordly possesions..I think that the first frost has to hit the gourds before one removes them from the vine..Then they have to dry out..Then you can turn them into birdhouses or whatever..There are some bushel basket gourds also..Mom
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Date: 10/19/2010 1:25:00 AM
Doris, a realistic, vivid portrayal of family " mscarriages".. the total tonality of this piece delights me .. wonderful! warmest, nette
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Date: 10/18/2010 10:53:00 PM
its never easy where families are concerned. Doris. this is an excellent piece of poetry, i can feel what you are writing, you never disappoint. Harry
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Date: 10/18/2010 7:44:00 PM
Love the ending I'd keep it, as it is.
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Date: 10/18/2010 7:24:00 PM
Excellent write ending with a meaningful prayer. Enjoyed this read, felt like I was there.
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