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Family Issues

befuddled by mud puddle conversation
motivated to stay away from those in the throes of saving face
at a sprinter's pace 
saving grace
each time I grind with people who don't mind blindly trying to debase my name
I end up sulking in the walk of shame

families need to learn to move on 
be strong
but for crying out loud, 
without a doubt,
there shall be heartfelt apologies issued from both sides
this bumpy ride might take a little swallowing of pride, 
many bona fide hugs with love 
you may go through a box or two of fresh tissues 
to properly address the issues
 
we must stare defiantly into the eyes of resistance 
identify the roots of our miscues 
giving the boot to artificial rituals 
to ambitiously make transitions,
 stitch up wounds
switch up moods
shake up, move
to a place where faces are soothed by smiles and laughter
a fresh chapter  
an escape after disasters happen
an island where 
we realize those who actually matter 
yes, addressing the crash
without making the past our current address

i write this piece in peace, for those who may be dueling with duress
stressed by words or actions of those who you may regret not being able to completely 
love, respect, and/or caress 

----------------------good love
                        takes hard work

©2014 ~JSL PoetTreez Publishing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/4/2014 12:57:00 AM
I really appreciate and enjoy this piece. I come from one of those broken families that love eachother despite the issues we suffer.
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Date: 7/13/2014 8:39:00 PM
Very nice work, JSL. Age old issue written about in a truly modern way. Well done. David
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Date: 7/3/2014 8:26:00 PM
JSL ..Wonderful work with this piece. A lot of people don't get that it takes both sides to work through the issues. I know this well, and I also know that just one person trying does not work. Thanks for the share Take care friend, Jess ;)
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Date: 6/19/2014 11:49:00 PM
this one is really good, Joey. I love the message you have imparted with your thought provoking poem!!
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:36:00 PM
Addressing the issues is the key, sadly most try to bury them. A well thought out excellent write and topic.
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:40:00 PM
Dear JS, This poem has a very important message. We never know when we will lose a family member and it's important to try and keep the peace. My sister and I had a falling out, but are trying to restore harmony. It benefits everyone in the family! Excellent write! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2014 2:29:00 PM
:) JSLambert, you hit the spot with this one. A loving family, we damage one another, It takes a good way, to earn the love and respect from others. Like You said HARD WORK.... I never like pointing fingers, until it's time. This is powerful, Enjoyed ... always ~LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2014 11:52:00 AM
Hello Mr Roboto, Nice to see you here. JSL<3 In the house:) <3.................:) So this is about family. I once believe blood is thicker than water. Well, it turns out that, water flows better than blood. And in some families bloods to thick no one can get through. Anyways, JSLamert, we moody people, will find a time to move on. A great and awesome poem. Thank you for this and the visit. luv~SKAT~
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