Family

Family I hold dear.
  Forever in my heart.
   Fortunalely for me
     From my daughters three,
      Flows love right back at me.
        Future is looking bright.

appreciationchildrenfamilyi loveverse

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Len Gasun

October 7, 2016 at 2:40 AM

This is such a very wonderful and lovely poem for your very beautiful family my dear friend, Jean. Many warm congrats (belated) on your fine win! Thanks a lot for sharing. love and hug, Galeo

Jean Murray

October 7, 2016 at 3:34 AM

+9Thank you for taking the time to comment Galeo.

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2016 at 3:01 PM

hey now, this is the number three? Well I say, three is looking fantastic. Congrats!

Jean Murray

September 27, 2016 at 3:36 PM

Looks good to me too Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 27, 2016 at 3:17 AM

- Congratulations Jean, on your lovely wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

September 27, 2016 at 3:58 AM

And congratulations to you too Anna-Lise.

Jan Allison

September 26, 2016 at 5:25 PM

three beauties to inspire you Jean:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

September 26, 2016 at 5:37 PM

To this day I often ask them "Which of you is the most beautiful?"

Kim Merryman

September 26, 2016 at 4:54 PM

Jean, that is a beautiful picture of your girls! I know you are proud of them and your love shows greatly in this winning write. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Jean Murray

September 26, 2016 at 5:35 PM

We have a song that goes "A mother's love's a blessing". It certainly was in this case Kim. Thank you for my placement.

Agnes Krampe

September 26, 2016 at 4:40 PM

Very sweet poem, Jean - congrats on your placement. Agnes

Jean Murray

September 26, 2016 at 5:34 PM

Thank you Agnes.

Seosamh De Burca

September 26, 2016 at 4:26 PM

Great photo and another great poem I could see the inspiration.

Jean Murray

September 26, 2016 at 5:33 PM

I wish I could say the photo looks blurey from a sepia effect Seasamh. In fact, it is dust on my scanner. Don't tell anyone what a lousy house keeper I am.