Family

Forever together
Always in love
Magically bonded
In harmony
Loving eachother  for all eternity  
Young and old,
                    TOGETHER WITH ME!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:29 PM
You are more than a best new poet. You are excellent, wonderful and mind jerking. What a lovely piece this is. Welcome to poetry soup dear colleague.
Pisani Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 2:01 AM
I arranged my mistake, hope it is better!
Pisani Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Elena, my suggestion for the addon line with L .. Loving each other Dad
Davey Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Congrats on winning POD
Murray Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Very nice.
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 12:19 PM
- Lovely :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Elena ! - hugs // Sun :)
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Perfect! congratulations on Poem of the Day :) Eve
K. Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 9:21 AM
You voice out such lovely thoughts on family, and I am happy for you how you have a wonderful family... I hope it's ok that I point out something, sweetie. I think you may have missed a line for the letter "L" for your acrostic-- maybe you weren't able to type it in? Otherwise, this is such a nice acrostic that make you feel good. :)
K. Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 10:28 AM
:)
Pisani Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:33 AM
You are right, I totally forgot the letter 'L' Thank you
Smith Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on being the poem of the day.
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Lovely acrostic Elena - just one little thing ... you need to do a line for 'l' :-) hugs Jan xx
Pisani Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 7:35 AM
I totally forgot, thank you
Chircop Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Yes, this beauty definitely defines your wonderful family.God bless you all..To my faves.
Vaso Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful sentiments!
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 3:16 AM
One of the most important things to have is love in you family. I like this
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:19 PM
SWEET little acrostic, Elena.
A  Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 3:50 PM
nice little poem, fa-skat
A   Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Awe, Elena, this is soso sweet.....Linda
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