Family

Forever together Always in love Magically bonded In harmony Loving eachother for all eternity Young and old, TOGETHER WITH ME!

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:29:00 PM

You are more than a best new poet. You are excellent, wonderful and mind jerking. What a lovely piece this is. Welcome to poetry soup dear colleague.

Elena Pisani

Date: 5/26/2016 2:01:00 AM

I arranged my mistake, hope it is better!

Matthew Pisani

Date: 5/25/2016 9:36:00 PM

Elena, my suggestion for the addon line with L .. Loving each other Dad

Brian Davey

Date: 5/25/2016 2:17:00 AM

Congrats on winning POD

Jean Murray

Date: 5/24/2016 4:19:00 PM

Very nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2016 12:19:00 PM

- Lovely :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Elena ! - hugs // Sun :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2016 11:20:00 AM

Perfect! congratulations on Poem of the Day :) Eve

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/24/2016 9:21:00 AM

You voice out such lovely thoughts on family, and I am happy for you how you have a wonderful family... I hope it's ok that I point out something, sweetie. I think you may have missed a line for the letter "L" for your acrostic-- maybe you weren't able to type it in? Otherwise, this is such a nice acrostic that make you feel good. :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/25/2016 10:28:00 AM