Nette Onclaud Poet Nonet

Family

Sunlight crackles in trill of daytime
grasses ripple on clay so moist
family rushes for quick juice
love swaying past doorway
car kevs zoom a sound 
children run off--
before byes
son plants...
kiss

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Howard Kerr September 9, 2026 at 11:34 AM Immaculate language, charming scene episodes, and tender emotions conveyed in crystal clear diction.🔥🔥⭐ Amazing is the word, Nette. Howard

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2026 at 5:29 AM Ahh!! So many emotions and enjoyments come from having a family to love. I enjoyed reading this one, Nette. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2026 at 9:12 AM Your "Family" is a lovely Nonet write. "Good Luck" We both did this fun contest. Have a fun/creative day writing away...........

Paige Hind March 23, 2026 at 6:40 PM you might want to change "car kevs" to keys but this is a beautiful Nonet, I like your use of language