Family

Hurt Remorse Betrayal Pain Fear Blood Blood that bonds us together Together till death All forgotten Nothing matters As the scarlet monster emerges through you As it takes the reigns of hurt Remorse Betrayal Pain Fear Blood Blood that bonds us together Together till death Nothing matters As despair envelope me With a burning scar That is yet to be erased.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/28/2020 12:23:00 PM

Hello Nizy Mizz,a lot of people go through abuse in the family. It would be hard to forgive them. But put it in the past where it belongs. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2023 10:35:00 AM

Hello Nizy, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\

Nizy Minzz
Date: 7/3/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you for your kind and supportive words Darlene!Appreciate it very much.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/28/2020 10:36:00 AM

A complicated one indeed... some are fortunate to have a loving family others have to work at it...Nice write

Nizy Minzz
Date: 7/3/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words:)