Faleshia Murphy Poet Rhyme

Family 1-10 Then10-1

1 Family can be so much fun
2 They care so much about you
3 Look how much they all love me
4 What else can a girl ask for
5 They keep all the memories alive
6 Some things you just don't need to fix
7 Sure wish I was still eleven
8 That's when  my family was great
9 Always together spending time 
10 You just have to love them
                 Then
10 Family sucks thank god for friends
            Let's go again
10 Don't ever ever ask about me again
9 Hope you love yours could care less about mine
             Let's go again
9 No one is there to help when your falling behind
8 When you need your money back they hesitate
7 All you two faced sinners talking about going to heaven
6 How many problems can one person fix
             Let's go again
6 They always got you caught up in the mix
5 Poetry soup helps me survive
             Let's go again
5 Poetry soup keeps me alive
4 Still at my door wanting more and more
             Let's go again
4 I just can't take it anymore
3 How many times are you going to borrow from me
             Let's go again
3 I help everyone but nobody can help me
2 I can't take no more lies from you
             Let's go again
2 There's nothing else that I can do
1 so disgusted that's it I'm done

Family 


for rambling poet contest
In search of the human mind

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Billy Thekidster March 31, 2010 at 3:05 PM Faleshia, one of the best I have read or heard. You certainly have a way with words. Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)

Ralph Taylor March 31, 2010 at 11:38 AM Very interesting Faleshia. Good job. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments.

Gert W. Knop March 31, 2010 at 6:05 AM We cannot select our family as we can with friends, but we have to live with it. Wishing you good luck for the contest and thank you for your comments---Have a happy Easter! Gert

Carrie Richards March 30, 2010 at 4:32 PM Families are complicated! Wishing you well in the contest!! BEst wishes, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown March 30, 2010 at 12:51 PM I hear you Faleshia and I feel ya too. I think I see this in the winners circle. I know it should be. Thank you for sharing my friend. Love, Carol