Kim Van Breda Poet Acrostic

Familiar Infinitian

FAMILIAR

Far from here my muse writes poems that
Ache right through my soul of need
Make me yearn- beg and plead
In ways that ache for
Love not mere gain
I want more
And take
Root
       
October 2015

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Skat A October 19, 2015 at 11:25 PM Hi Kim, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 17, 2015 at 1:21 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Kim!

Kim Van Breda October 16, 2015 at 9:57 PM Thank you to all you fellow "Soupers" for your encouraging comments. The placing was an unexpected but pleasant surprise :) ~~X~~

Carrie Richards October 16, 2015 at 8:00 PM Your poems have also taken root with those who enjoy them so much!! Well done, Kim !!

Alexis Y. October 16, 2015 at 7:52 PM Kim, I enjoyed the message . Nice form! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2015 at 7:35 PM Just love the message in this one. Congrats for your fine win.

Charlotte Puddifoot October 16, 2015 at 4:43 PM a smooth rendering of the form, polished, with depth and a nice bit of rhyme need/plead; those last three lines are particularly good - congrats on your win in my contest! Kim Van Breda October 16, 2015 at 10:00 PM Thank you Charlotte.. appreciate the recognition ~~X~~

Jan Allison October 16, 2015 at 4:33 PM beautifully penned Kim many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx