Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

Notes About The Poem

- Falsehood -

Is there still a rainbow after the rain?
An unanswered message, life is full of lies

Darkness falls - like a thief steals the daylight
I get confused - hear demons whisper

It happened so suddenly, struggling to breathe
Tired of all the things that hurts

If life was an adventure I would love to dance
Everything around me is in a white blur - the truth?








  20.07.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
  (unrhymed couplets)
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Nilima Deb August 12, 2016 at 6:28 AM lovely write !!!..loved the flow dear. Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2016 at 7:26 AM - Nilima, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi August 3, 2016 at 2:59 AM My dear Sunshine, dance and dance more.... There is a dragon in our path keeps treasures on loan.... Defy the dragon's wrath when love's treasures shone..... Anne-Lise Andresen August 6, 2016 at 12:07 PM - Thanks Pashang, for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Corbin July 28, 2016 at 8:40 AM Loved this one! Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2016 at 8:56 AM - Michelle, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Street Poet July 27, 2016 at 6:21 AM I wish to make it in my native language. Will u please permit ? Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2016 at 6:35 AM - With pleasure, but you have to post it in my name - I have the   : Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Let me know when you post it :) - hugs

Street Poet July 27, 2016 at 6:18 AM Very good poem; what logic behind first 2 lines ? Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2016 at 6:38 AM - Who can we trust ..... many have many different faces ..... a friend? .... an enemy ? .....an uncertain world - hugs

Daniel Turner July 25, 2016 at 8:06 AM Sorry I missed your POTD. Last week was pretty hectic for me. Congratulations for your write. Yes life is full of lies. How we deal with those lies determines our character. Just dance Anne Lise, it's more fun to be happy! Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2016 at 8:09 AM - Never too late Daniel, nice to see you when you have time :) - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Umar Kakamu Aliyu July 22, 2016 at 5:14 PM congrats on your poem selection. nice poem. Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2016 at 6:04 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Umar :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei July 22, 2016 at 4:41 PM Anee, Well penned. A big congrats for ur well deserving POTD. A 7 from me........//:) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2016 at 6:03 AM - Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and congratulations, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman July 22, 2016 at 3:44 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A TR/FAV here on this deep and very powerful write. And Congratulations on POTD too!! Truth and Falsehood; Light and Darkness; are constant warring companions in this world we call our "mortal existence." Where is and what is the truth?? are constant questions which puzzle many and pervade the human psyche. A most excellent couplet!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 3:51 PM - Your comments mean a lot to me, dear Gary - I really appreciate a tr. + fav. from you - Many unanswered questions on our journey - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman July 22, 2016 at 10:47 AM Darkness, a part of life. Dark emotional write. Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 11:04 AM - That is right, James - Appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan July 22, 2016 at 9:25 AM Deep write... Congrats for your well deserved POTD.... Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 11:03 AM - Thanks Supraja, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Chansarkar July 22, 2016 at 8:43 AM Lovely words with a deep truth,so happy for you Sunshine,congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 9:03 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance July 22, 2016 at 8:27 AM There is so much here in these few lines, powerful thoughts that lie in the darkness of the letters. Grats on this piece being featured as poem of the day! Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 8:30 AM - Thanks Casarah, for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. July 22, 2016 at 8:10 AM Hi Anne-Lise, This a deep thought provoking write. Congrats on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 8:13 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith July 22, 2016 at 6:52 AM Great work, congratulations Sunshine on POTD honors... Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 7:46 AM - Thanks Charlie, that was a pleasant surprise :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso July 21, 2016 at 11:36 PM This is a fav for me, such intensity! A7 Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 7:53 AM - A pleasure, thanks for a fav. and a 7 Arthur - Always nice to see you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2016 at 5:00 PM Very creative work..Expressive and emotive..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 7:49 AM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Misty Mccoi July 21, 2016 at 3:19 PM Sunshine Smile, I like your poem. I feel what you are talking about. Good writing. Misty Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2016 at 7:48 AM - Appreciate your comments Misty, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2016 at 5:08 AM A deeply philosophical couplet my dearest, Anne-Lise! Enjoyed it a lot! A seven! Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2016 at 7:58 AM - Dear Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive your positive comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam July 21, 2016 at 4:23 AM Excellent. Beautifully said. Life to be truth always. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2016 at 7:56 AM - Appreciate your comments Ravi, a pleasure you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath July 20, 2016 at 6:00 PM i think it's a situation of great frustration caused out of heart broken. Beautifully expressed. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2016 at 7:54 AM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud July 20, 2016 at 4:38 PM i like how this was done as the search for truth continues in life, anne... so lovely; happy huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2016 at 7:51 AM - Nette, thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper July 20, 2016 at 2:47 PM A blessing for life to be truth but temptation is always there to cause havoc. Love the thoughts Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2016 at 3:48 PM - Words of truth, dear Eve - thanks for friendly visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison July 20, 2016 at 1:49 PM I especially love the second couplet Anne Lise - a wonderful poem:-) hugs Jan xx7 Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2016 at 2:43 PM - Always a pleasure to receive your positive comments and enjoyable visit, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith July 20, 2016 at 1:35 PM Oh this is so good A-L...a favorite Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2016 at 2:41 PM - Highly appreciate your comments, a pleasure you enjoy it Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)