Falsehood

Fitting like second skin,
far better than what he
finds in the closet. Now 
feathered, a Mardi Gras;
floating on dance of lies.
False hopes of romance masked,
For this man's lonely schemes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 6, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Hi Gabby, a deep poem... we are twisted.. love this one... Linda
Guzzi Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Loved the enjambment! Congrad's Light & Love
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:37 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!! :)fitting for the win indeed :)
Callus Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 5:58 AM
A fitting win Gabby; a quality write; congrats. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Beautiful write on the theme ! Gabby nice take wid this n so is the great win ! congrats !
Onclaud Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 4:51 AM
just the sort of quality piece that i wanted; you made me feel the character 's pain, gabby.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs
Thajudeen Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Safe to get into a mask now!
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