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False Peace

When it rains it brings me a false peace It's hard to explain, I just feel at ease Perhaps it's because people run inside They don't want to get wet, so they run and hide At that moment we are of like mind They want shelter, they wait for a sign Unknowingly they join me and enter my domain It's a cold place, much like the rain But when the sky clears, they feel free to roam Unfortunately for me I'm stuck inside, all alone

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/30/2014 4:37:00 AM

:) your title is catchy.. and I understand what you mean here.. :) love your first line.. :) Welcome to Poetrysoup.. :)! this your first poem here.. :) I am Olive eloisa, i had been here more than 2years now... tell you what I am enjoying my time here.. I love learning the poetry types and try them and write about anything.. :)! The community here are a wow! it's juts pity each one is far from each other for a meeting.. :) and the contests are challenging.. :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 4:38:00 AM

am no expert but only a learner.. :)! you can always soupmail me whenever you like someone to talk too.. :) ... olive eloisa here.. :)! God bless you always..!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2014 4:57:00 PM

Jason, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jason Conley
Date: 10/7/2014 5:20:00 PM

Much appreciated :) Warm regards to you. This has been a welcoming place indeed!

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:13:00 AM

Jason, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jason Conley
Date: 10/7/2014 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Skat, I enjoyed reading your work and I appreciate the welcome :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/5/2014 12:10:00 AM

A deep powerful piece - well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Jason Conley
Date: 10/7/2014 5:22:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 1:44:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jason - I choose your first very well written poem in rhyme - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jason Conley
Date: 10/7/2014 5:24:00 PM

And I look forward to reading your poetry as well :) Thank you kindly!

Brittany Larson

Date: 10/2/2014 12:13:00 PM

Also welcome to the soup. I am sure you will be very welcome here. This was a great first peace and what a great community to post it in. Much love a good wishes, Brittany

Jason Conley
Date: 10/2/2014 12:37:00 PM

Thank you Brittany, I appreciate the welcome )