False Creation

We are the creation you and I 
Preachers of God not good
Serving our needs in his name
No part of us left to have any shame

He did his job and flew
Made us unstable like winter dew
Left us on the brink between good and bad
Trying to figure out if we are angry or just sad

Bad if we be
Still think we can be good as he 
Doers of evil we are ourselves
Thinking from every sin we are free

Good in turn if we be 
In this world we must cease to be 
For here no good deed works
Until we impose full decree…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 8:50 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 25, 2020 at 12:42 AM
Brilliant poem mate!
Ch Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 12:16 AM
A beautiful and fearless piece of poetry which is not afraid to comment on the dark truths of today's world. Truly an amazing reading experience.
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