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Fall's Weather Collection

through kitchen's glass pane browning leaf tumbles, twirls down... yellow butterfly morning glories choke fall's mexican petunias... last green pear hangs high cool crisp breezy air high pressure from northwest holds... hurricane's low whirls
Date written: 09/28/2022 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Contest: A Haiku Collection Of Three SyllableCounter.Net Grammarly
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Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:03 AM
~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Thank you, Anna-Louise. I appreciate your dropping by with congratulations. Sara
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October 10, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Brilliant collection of haikus, Sara! Love each one of these - so original! Congrats on your win. Love ~ Mala
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Thanks for dropping by with congratulations, Malabika. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Sands Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Great Haiku Sara. Creatively written. Congratulations for your win :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 7:02 AM
Heidi, Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Very good haiku writing, Sara. Congrats on the winner list
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Andrea, Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spend here. Sara
Poet Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here reading and saying congratulations on my work. Sara
May Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Sara
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Joseph, Thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my work. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:39 AM
Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poems!
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Tania. Your visit is appreciated. Sara
Eslinger Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Sara, I do love haiku collections, tho I prefer to say Series. This collection is quite accomplished. I enjoyed the move through, and each Aha moment was indeed impact-full. Take care! xo
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Yes, Series would be a better word for several Haiku together. I appreciate the uplifting review of my work. Sara
Deschler Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 10:54 AM
I, too, enjoy witnessing the change of seasons from my kitchen window as I wash the dishes... And, this set of haiku was just as lovely... Best wishes for the contest!
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Why, thank you, Kelly. I appreciate your dropping by with such a nice review of my work. Sara
Poetry Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:22 AM
AMAZING HAIKu describing the events of the season with their poetic beauty naturally captured by the poet's verve congrats dear... ! salute alkas
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Thank you, Alkas for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the kind review. We've had quite some events recently. Sara
Buehler Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Delightful images crowd this beautiful, autumn haiku series. Enjoyed! :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 4:58 AM
Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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September 28, 2022 at 10:42 AM
I enjoyed the imagery here, dear Sara!
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Kim. We might not get much out of the hurricane so they are now saying, time will tell. A nice breezy day though today. Sara
Poet Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:37 AM
These lovely haikus were a pleasure to read and your imagery is wonderful, Sara. Hugs and regards
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Lasaad, I appreciate the high regard. Sara
May Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 6:45 AM
I enjoyed thes beautiful haikus Sara, best wishes
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Pandit Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Beautiful images of fall, Sara. Best to you.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:46 AM
Vijay, Thank you. SK
Buhagiar Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Best get some sturdy ladder and get that pear, before it goes sour. Lovely haikus.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Victor, The weather that they say is coming will get it. I expect it is 20 to 25 feet up and I don't think that is a job for grandma. I would not even ask my grandson to try to get it unless we had a Cherrypicker equipped truck. LOL. Your comment added some brightness to my page. Sara
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