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Fall's Begining

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Just a little fall weather now

I have noticed the rising sun is sending up those pale rainbow colors lately..

Fall's Beginning Written by: Sara Kendrick The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky Crinolines on horizon with gown Early zephry cool and air wrung dry The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky A start to a wonderful day birds cry Leaves in places now caramel brown The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky Crinolines on horizon with gown by~Poet Destroyer We walk the green fern garden range! We sit and stare and tease our eyes! Emotions flow with my Easter dress so strange; Easter morn vocals came within range! We're dancing, like leaves that rearrange! I twirl my gown to fly with the skies. Angel dust travels swiftly in the open range. Clouds fall so vividly on my gown like crinolines disguise!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2011 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/17/2011 8:11:00 AM

A wonderful win and write... congrats my dear friend.....always Michael

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/17/2011 3:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2011 1:03:00 PM

Lovely co write. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Cory Long

Date: 9/16/2011 11:03:00 AM

congrats on a fantastic win my friend cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2011 7:52:00 AM

Congrats Sara on a fantastic finish for second place with the collab piece with PD.. wonderful words luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2011 1:27:00 AM

Sara, Congratulations on your wonderful entry for my contest... for the record this is my first triolet ever... thank you for the joy of working with you... always,..p.d.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/20/2011 6:47:00 PM

Beautiful description here my friend. Loved it. Such colorful imagery. Good job. God Bless, JB

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/20/2011 1:26:00 PM

A most elegant scribe Sara, good to experience the aspect you describe..

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/20/2011 10:23:00 AM

A nice picture you have painted,Sara.Nicely rhyming too......

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 8/19/2011 11:36:00 PM

Thank your for posting this, I really enjoyed it sara. I look forward to reading your others!

James Foulk

Date: 8/19/2011 9:53:00 PM

was not long ago i was looking forward to summer, not i say bring on fall. a great piece of poetry, enjoyed. thank you for commenting on Farewell for now soupers. it is not a vacation we just can't afford the internet because we are moving and our rent is more. most people that are reading this are missing the whole message! it is not about me leaving as it is about the people of poetrysoup and the incouragement you have all been, read it agan please.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/19/2011 7:42:00 PM

The sweet taste of Fall...It's my favorite time of the year and to have all off your descriptions present would be the best autumn of all time! Great job!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2011 4:31:00 PM

wow, this should have gone to my last contest, sara... so elegant; i likey! autmn beckons!:) huggs, nette

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 8/19/2011 12:04:00 PM

absolutly lovely !! I enjoyed reading your poem!!---Lori

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2011 11:53:00 AM

oh, ok, it's the archaic version of strewn. I had never seen it before!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2011 11:51:00 AM

Sara, check out the word strown.I think it might be strewn. Anyway, I LOVE this one. What a great triolet.So descriptive. The line about crinolines and early zephyr cool and air wrung dry, genius!!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2011 11:51:00 AM

Lovely romantic piece on Autumn (Fall), my friend. Yes, we went to the Isle of Wight and Sue saw bedbugs crawling towards her on the pillow while I was in the bath - the room was infested. We got another room, but didn't feel comfortable all week after that and were both glad to get home! I've had a phobia about hotels ever since

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/19/2011 11:29:00 AM

sweet lovely scenes of the coming Season Sara.. but I am hoping for much more Summer for a bit longer.. lovely expressions with this form my friend..luv..