Fallower

i see you give here orders, and she fallows like your little obediant girl she fallows every direction, she doesnt think twice she doesnt know when to say when but the only one she hurts is herself because she knows if doesnt she would hurt you

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2008 4:25:00 PM

Follower I see you give orders to her and she follows. Your obediant little girl. She follows every direction. She doesn't think twice. She doesn't know when to say when. But, the only one she hurts is herself. Because, she knows, if she doesn't, she will hurt you. Powerful just needs spelling & punctuation corrects. Hope this helps. Debbie