Fallower

i see you give here orders, and she fallows
like your little obediant girl
she fallows every direction, she doesnt think twice
she doesnt know when to say when
but the only one she hurts is herself
because she knows if doesnt
she would hurt you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 14, 2008 at 4:25 PM
Follower I see you give orders to her and she follows. Your obediant little girl. She follows every direction. She doesn't think twice. She doesn't know when to say when. But, the only one she hurts is herself. Because, she knows, if she doesn't, she will hurt you. Powerful just needs spelling & punctuation corrects. Hope this helps. Debbie
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