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Falling Time

A shadow drifts across the wall... Grabbing time as the sun falls... Written for "Time Contest"

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/14/2012 12:57:00 PM

thank you so much for your kind comments... you seem to handle many styles very well... few words, big picture :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 7:12:00 PM

SUPER IMAGINATIVE COUPLET MICHAEL LUV FOR TIME IS SO ILLUSIVE .. GOOD LUCK FROM YOUR JG .. XOXO

Cory Long

Date: 8/27/2012 4:36:00 AM

nicely done.. good luck in the contest cory

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/27/2012 4:23:00 AM

Excellent Michael! A sure winner.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2012 8:01:00 PM

This can be a very intellectual piece if you put your mind deep into what you wrote! I really love this very delightful write my friend! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 7:56:00 PM

Time is easy to come by...but hard to grasp on as moments go by... everything up must come down..especially this smile I wear at times... some times I have lots of it... sometimes I do not...love your entry...good luck in the contest...pd

Cory Long
Date: 8/27/2012 4:36:00 AM

PD never loose your SMILE.. :)