Falling Time

A shadow drifts across the wall...
Grabbing time as the sun falls...


Written for "Time Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Adams Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 12:57 PM
thank you so much for your kind comments... you seem to handle many styles very well... few words, big picture :)
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September 2, 2012 at 7:12 PM
SUPER IMAGINATIVE COUPLET MICHAEL LUV FOR TIME IS SO ILLUSIVE .. GOOD LUCK FROM YOUR JG .. XOXO
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August 27, 2012 at 4:36 AM
nicely done.. good luck in the contest cory
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August 27, 2012 at 4:23 AM
Excellent Michael! A sure winner.
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August 26, 2012 at 8:01 PM
This can be a very intellectual piece if you put your mind deep into what you wrote! I really love this very delightful write my friend! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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August 26, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Time is easy to come by...but hard to grasp on as moments go by... everything up must come down..especially this smile I wear at times... some times I have lots of it... sometimes I do not...love your entry...good luck in the contest...pd
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August 27, 2012 at 4:36 AM
PD never loose your SMILE.. :)
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