Falling Skies

When snow falls,
They look like spectacular stars,
In the evening, they shine upon,
The hair of the maidens
who gaze at it in awe.
Such a sweet felling it gives
To be out with such a gift.
That when you tilt your face upwards
Your face gets snow covered,
Like the water lily
And as white as the sky,
Looking at it makes me always wonder why
Its softness brings beautiful memories
Of mothers hands,
It is such a joyful spectacle
To get your feet covered in  snow filled creek
The nature is always to be commended,
For its great work commenced,
Never asking why
It just melts 
and  shys..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 9, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Rather charming! Why not finish it of with: "It just melts and shys...back into winters pink skies". Or something like the such. Nicely conceived - very well done! :) john
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