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Falling Skies

When snow falls, They look like spectacular stars, In the evening, they shine upon, The hair of the maidens who gaze at it in awe. Such a sweet felling it gives To be out with such a gift. That when you tilt your face upwards Your face gets snow covered, Like the water lily And as white as the sky, Looking at it makes me always wonder why Its softness brings beautiful memories Of mothers hands, It is such a joyful spectacle To get your feet covered in snow filled creek The nature is always to be commended, For its great work commenced, Never asking why It just melts and shys..

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Date: 7/9/2015 2:40:00 PM
Rather charming! Why not finish it of with: "It just melts and shys...back into winters pink skies". Or something like the such. Nicely conceived - very well done! :) john
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