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Michael J. Falotico

Falling Nowhere

I'm holding the rope

                      until my hands loose their grip,

                                                            only to wake up...

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 9:04 PM

Michael, please do not fall into deep.... god grip..i assume....pd

Francine Roberts

September 11, 2010 at 11:06 AM

good one

September 11, 2010 at 5:24 AM

It reminds me of my dreams of falling which doesn't happen as often as they use to.. Great write hun, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

September 10, 2010 at 11:24 PM

good use of different point of veiws, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Andrea Dietrich

September 10, 2010 at 11:17 PM

What a great dreamlike haiku, Michael!!

September 10, 2010 at 8:43 PM

Very in the moment and masterfully written. I have to argue about the form. It's a Senryu.

September 10, 2010 at 7:38 PM

a frightening moment told and deeper meaning met.. enjoyed it Michael...Take care..Deb

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

September 10, 2010 at 7:03 PM

WOW! Scary dream! Well written Haiku! Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.

September 10, 2010 at 5:27 PM

THIS HAS LOTS OF MEANING~luv*SKAT

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