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Falling Leaves

The wind is blowing,

      Enticing the leaves to dance,

           Then fall....exhausted.






for the "Fall" contest

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Carol Fillmore

September 1, 2010 at 11:59 AM

very clever word play in this! excellent job on this, Francine, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 28, 2010 at 9:34 PM

I love how you did your haiku on fall! LUv, Andrea

Faleshia Murphy

August 28, 2010 at 2:27 PM

very nice good luck in the contest and thanks for your kind comments have a great weekend faleshia

Doris Culverhouse

August 28, 2010 at 7:32 AM

veracious write...the wind was swirling the leaves from on side of the yard to the other last night. they looked like little kites with rocket packs.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 28, 2010 at 4:06 AM

A ni ce expressive haiku on the Fall, Francine

Carolyn Devonshire

August 27, 2010 at 10:39 PM

You brought the leaves to life in the wind. Very nice use of personification! Excellent haiku and I wish you success in the "fall" contest. Love, Carolyn