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Falling Into Autumn

Gentle breeze threw the trees, walks me past the falling leaves, Chasing each other to the ground to bring color all around, Red, Yellow, Green, Orange and Brown, keep on falling down, I rescued one and held on to it for just a moments time, And then again I let it loose the wind swept it up and then down, Threw the air it played a while and then I smiled , What would fall be without the falling leaves............

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/8/2008 9:24:00 AM
Big smile. You capture my favorite time of year to perfection in this poem Thank you, Autumn
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Date: 10/1/2008 5:00:00 PM
thats cool. fall is the best season, not to hot, not to cold. and i'm liking the rhymes.
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Date: 9/30/2008 9:58:00 PM
A poem of love for nature! This is an excellent poem! Brgds. George
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Date: 9/30/2008 8:03:00 PM
Phebe I reckon it would be rather bland - Beautiful Poetry - God Bless
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Date: 9/30/2008 3:52:00 PM
this brings a smile to my face I love fall and the colors of the chaning leaves, take care D-nyce
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