Deneen White Poet Haiku

Falling In Love

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              l
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                        g..........    
                           
                                  in love 

                             is easy staying
                                  there is the
                                    challenge

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John Loving Iii December 19, 2011 at 4:59 PM it take two baby.

Des Juan Richardson September 30, 2009 at 11:05 PM Very creative format and very honest! I enjoyed your writing as usual. ~Des Juan

L'Nass Shango May 29, 2009 at 7:11 AM Original and beautiful display of creativity. Great write.

Ashley Caldwell May 20, 2009 at 10:34 PM Very creative format

Sara Lokken April 4, 2009 at 11:36 AM A challenge, perhaps...but also an agony. Very wise. Love, Sara:)

Adell Foster April 1, 2009 at 6:05 AM Your words are presented as pearls of wisdom my friend, great tone, imagery and flow as wriiten in superb shape form. Thank you D-Nyce for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

Sean Kelly March 30, 2009 at 6:26 AM D-nyce , great visual and great observation ...

Brian Strand March 29, 2009 at 11:40 PM Nice viaual variation D-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sharon Winter March 29, 2009 at 5:23 PM Wow. This is so cleverly written and so true! Excellent! Love, Shar

P Sheart March 29, 2009 at 2:11 PM Hi Deneen Awe, I just love this for isn't it the truth for so many these days. If one is lucky enough to find love they better hold on to it tooth and nail.....Perfect hun just perfect! Thanks for your most welcome comments on my latest lyric it meant a lot to me. Hope you're doing well, I'm sending good thoughts your way. Love Light Truth Patricia

Christopher Higgins March 29, 2009 at 1:18 PM Yes my friend...the work to keep it going is the trick....love the flow and the form of the piece...