Falling Asleep

Falling asleep to white static’s sound
coated in Cheetos and dream dust.
I’ll catch a black and white ride 
upon a star’s rough shore.
This blanket softens
coaxing my mind
as eyes close
to risk
it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Vaso Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 1:29 AM
You had me at cheetos LOL
Udaeta Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 7:02 AM
Lmao!! Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers!
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