Falling Apart

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FALLING APART

When you think your world is falling apart

Wrap your arms around your heart

Give yourself a loving embrace

Keep that smile upon your face

Whatever it is that you might fear

Cast aside, make that crystal clear

As hard as that might seem to be

Rescue your mind with positivity

Do not go down and let fear in

For that will be your downfall sin

Your choice. Your thoughts, you’re in control

Up or down, you’re on a roll

For what might seem like a broken heart

Could be the beginning of an amazing start

Have the strength to carry on

Act as if you can’t go wrong

Although you might not have a clue

There’s an amazing world in front of you!

Find the courage and the strength

Do not stop at any length

Believe in your dreams, and start a new

And know your wishes will come true!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/28/2010 10:04:00 AM
Hi Simone I accept everything you write .This being the philosophy I choose to live my life by.I believe in love and laughter, focusing on what is and not what if?-living in the moment.I find your words inspirational and a unique way of sharing these thoughts and ideas in a more simplified form(very clever) in a way that others' can understand and not shie away from. Luv June
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:53:00 PM
Simone, wishes and dreams do come true we just have to have the patience till that time comes and then when it does our wait will be worth its weight in gold and then someone will show us all the appreciation that we could never find in anyone until they came along. Thank you for sharing this poem with all of us here in poetry soup because I thoroughly enjoyed my visit here with you today ,Sincerely Dean
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:55:00 PM
Smile ~ "This Is Soo Very Soft, Sincere & Beautiful, 'Precious & Beautiful Simone Segal!!!'" ~ Smile, I just wanted to stop by once more to not only view "The Beauty of Your Heart & Souls Words" but also to, "Thank You," for gracing my poe with Your wonderful com dear lady and, I am looking forward to viewing much more of "Your Many Splendors Dear" ~ "So Beautiful Your Poem" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Tomorrows, Dear Lovely Simone," Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/1/2010 12:37:00 PM
Very positive outlook on life that you have penned in this one..Hope that you can continue in your life with this sunny outlook..Enjoyed the reading of your penned words...Sara
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Date: 8/1/2010 11:42:00 AM
I had to reread this poem, great encourager!!
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:33:00 PM
Very positive thoughts - which I can use since I am just recovering from an illness. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Simone. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:22:00 PM
I needed to hear this today...It has been a rough few days!
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Date: 7/29/2010 2:04:00 PM
positive thinking
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Date: 7/29/2010 1:25:00 PM
FABULOUS Simone... and so happy to see u posting today... a wonderful write full of great messages and insights... your two last lines fit me perfectly... my dreams are all coming true... on August 22nd am getting married to my long time LUV, Ron, in Calabria, Italy on the Amalphi Coast at a Villa some of our friends are letting us honeymoon at for two weeks....WoW.. a perfect poem to read today... enjoyed. and hope u will be with us on the beach at twilight on that day..luv..
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