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Falling Again

Out of the cold, in blew the rain After a kiss goodbye, the lonely teardrops came a-falling ... falling Another frozen tv dinner date, and a RomCom bittersweet, cable treat awaits Enchantress on the silver screen is beckoning, pillow softly, in your moonlight glow dreams Seems all vow hope has fallen asleep heart empty And the tears are starting to twilight fall once again Oh no ... oh, oh Oh oh oh oh oh not again Those lonely teardrops are a-falling Leaves you wondering, when will the pulse projector change the scene With a flip of the fate switch, life becomes peachy keen On a park bench daydream, comes a beauty in a blue dress tigress walking It’s got your deer thoughts prey hoping Praying that she stop and take notice Of how long it’s been Her sunshine smile waves a friendly hello And you feel the winds of change starting to warmly blow Over time, with rainbow charm, she takes you in her gentle arms To caress away the crying pain, so that the tears would stop a-falling ... falling Now, on the treadmill again — Running from old, sad memories into the bosom embrace of a rare exotica new friend Romantic notions are starry-eye a-twinkling As tears of joy begin to freely fall once again Oh no ... oh, oh Oh oh oh oh oh not again Those tender teardrops are a-falling ... falling Falling again Looks like you’re smitten, and falling ... once again

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Date: 12/12/2019 9:30:00 AM
Oh how tender thoe teardrops fall, enchanting write Freddie.
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Date: 12/9/2019 3:01:00 AM
what a magical piece my friend you did this justice. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/8/2019 12:36:00 PM
I like how you interwove those tender teardrops with the lonely teardrops, both blending into an 'Oh, no; oh, no...falling, falling' refrain. Nicely executed, my friend! Warm, tearless wishes, Gershon
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Date: 12/8/2019 7:42:00 AM
sometimes it is better to hold back, but you cant control what your heart feels... a very romantic write in your own unique style my friend..
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Date: 12/8/2019 7:28:00 AM
I love it when you flipped the switch in the middle of this poem, Freddie. "On a park bench daydream, comes a beauty in a blue dress tigress walking" - I knew something wonderful was going to happen.
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Date: 12/7/2019 11:38:00 PM
##Those lonely teardrops are a-falling....## Beautiful lines.. Nice thoughts..
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Date: 12/7/2019 4:32:00 PM
Interesting...sings like a song. From sad to sweet! ...another frozen tv dinner date, With a flip of the fate switch, life becomes peachy keen...nice phrasing
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Date: 12/7/2019 9:33:00 AM
From sadness to joy falls the tears, Well penned Freddie
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