Falling

My wings are broken for the words unspoken
And i'm falling so fast
Falling, falling into the past
Theres nobody there to catch me
I'm going to hit the ground
Air passes around me
A silent screaming sound
My eyes are tightly shut
I can't see a thing
My arms are outstretched
Reaching, grasping only air
My small filter of hope has
Dissappeared
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 11:33 AM
THE NAME OF THE POEM IS''lost in life''..your poem is ''FALLING''. I feel like that when no one is thier to pick me up....
A  Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 11:29 AM
I really enjoyed your poem. I got one for you to read of mine if you please..A close relation to your poem ontop.
Torbenson Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM
i like this poem of yours it flows smooth reached out and grabed me ... good job keep writtin
Norvell Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 11:03 AM
smooth write. love your work. best wishes.....
Loveless Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 9:25 AM
I love this. Its beautiful, and smooth. .:Rain:.
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Sounds lonely and scary. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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