Falling

Falling,falling im falling into a deep black hole just like a man who has sinned 
over,and over again and canot be forgiven because no ones listening, no one 
cares no one wants to hear the lies the ungodelly lies over and over again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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June 5, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Aliena, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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May 17, 2009 at 2:03 PM
This is such an excellent poem. It flow with such grace and reverence. I really like the essence of the piece and the praise it brings. Great job! ~Joseph
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