Fallen Tree

Limp, numb, abandoned 
Beautiful core darkened sadly 
Footprints now walk on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Beautiful images with nice turn of thought in the last line, Ashley
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 12:02 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Ashley. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 11:46 PM
I like how the last line was very haiku like!
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