Fallen Girl

Swelling within a night with gin
a dog howls at the sin.

Swallowing lust within her bust
a fitful man will be dust.

Destined to reveal a much fevered mate
last morn be at her plate.

Leaving the home of past
to return to a unpleasant task.

Fallen girl get up and make
this home stand straight.
It is you that has played a time or two
now make this pain fall away.

A time of scorn and hate
determined the life that was to break.

Torn between two she had the game
the girl will play their fate.

Smirking with pleasure 
she forgets the weather.

Dark and gloomy the soul is done
a passion to be loved is now by none.

Fallen girl get up and make
this home stand straight.
It is you that has played a time or two
now make this pain fall away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Owen Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Very nice, I really like this.
Mccallum Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 5:39 PM
Thank you Nicole!
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December 1, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Lovely write this and welcome .Thanks for sharing xx
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December 2, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Mandy!!
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December 1, 2012 at 7:14 AM
This reads like a verse of courage! [Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help or information it would be my pleasure to aid you. I am running a Contest now for 6 lines of verse on the topic light..please do enter. Light & Love]
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December 2, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Debbie, I am new to the site... and am trying to still learning my way around. I will look for the entrance to the contest.... Sounds fun!
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