Fallen Angel Contest

A blood, red rose
pressed against her pale skin
A work of art, with a shattered heart
She reeked of sweet sin

Merely a sheep
With eyes, a royal gold 
Though the risk was steep
She was his to hold

A mortal lover, by night
A metal hook held her wings
Before dawn she took flight
By noon, she sings

She always knew her fate
But, wouldn't change a thing
Except the morning she was late
With a punctured left wing

There would be no goodbye
She was banished right away
Expelled from the sky
In debt, with Hell to pay

So she stands alone and weeps
With a rose from his grave
Dreaming of her sheep
Atop the bed she made
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Lovely imagery and a clever turn of phrase conveys such emotion in this sad write. She knew the consequences, but her love was worth the risk. Best of luck in the contest, Anna. Regards, John.
Sivey Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:22 AM
Wow! Anna, this is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this illustrious poem this morning! I found this poem to flow excellently and I just know that this will do awesome in the contest! Such a delight this was to read! Great Work!!
Warrior Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Well crafted Anna...best of luck my friend...although I smell a winner...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 1:43 PM
A sadness comes through here. It seems to have life parallels.
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