Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Rhyme

Fallen Angel

Self banished from castle of dreams
Boiling poisonous emotions of cess pool
Dominate evil feelings as rapid streams
Living the fantasies from being a fool

An arrow crossed the once loving soul
Robbing forever the sacred innocence
Discovering the lies that smelt foul
Making a world full of indiferrence

Black attire is the color that describes
The inner tones that paint vividly
Aftermath of deceptions that subscribes
In the mind that wanders fervidly



For Fallen Angel Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Second Place
August 5, 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden August 25, 2017 at 3:45 PM Beautiful write, Nayda, and exquisite phrasing - congrats on your win! :-) Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 25, 2017 at 8:06 PM Thank you Greg.

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 25, 2017 at 7:18 AM Congrats, Nayda on the win. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 25, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thank you Subimal.

Beautiful Scars August 25, 2017 at 6:36 AM sweet Nayda, love the imagery and so very beautifully expressed! thank you and congrats :)

Ralph Sergi August 10, 2017 at 4:30 PM Hi Nayda: I was deeply blown away by your intense wordage. I wish you well in the contest! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 10, 2017 at 7:43 PM Thank you Ralph.

Eve Roper August 8, 2017 at 8:56 PM Deep write with a lot of imagery depicting the photo , Nayda, well done and good luck in the contest.. ~* Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 8, 2017 at 9:44 PM Thank you Eve.

Janis Medders Tobechi August 8, 2017 at 10:56 AM Great imagery. Good luck in the contest. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 8, 2017 at 7:23 PM Thank you Janis.

Susan Ashley August 5, 2017 at 9:16 PM Hi Nayda, beautifully done. Good luck in the contest! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 5, 2017 at 11:23 PM Thank you Susan.