Fallen Angel

Self banished from castle of dreams
Boiling poisonous emotions of cess pool
Dominate evil feelings as rapid streams
Living the fantasies from being a fool

An arrow crossed the once loving soul
Robbing forever the sacred innocence
Discovering the lies that smelt foul
Making a world full of indiferrence

Black attire is the color that describes
The inner tones that paint vividly
Aftermath of deceptions that subscribes
In the mind that wanders fervidly



For Fallen Angel Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Second Place
August 5, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/25/2017 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful write, Nayda, and exquisite phrasing - congrats on your win! :-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/25/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Greg.
Date: 8/25/2017 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, Nayda on the win.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/25/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 8/25/2017 6:36:00 AM
sweet Nayda, love the imagery and so very beautifully expressed! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 8/10/2017 4:30:00 PM
Hi Nayda: I was deeply blown away by your intense wordage. I wish you well in the contest!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/10/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Ralph.
Date: 8/8/2017 8:56:00 PM
Deep write with a lot of imagery depicting the photo , Nayda, well done and good luck in the contest.. ~*
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2017 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 8/8/2017 10:56:00 AM
Great imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Janis.
Date: 8/5/2017 9:16:00 PM
Hi Nayda, beautifully done. Good luck in the contest!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/5/2017 11:23:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
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