Fallen

brave fallen soldiers   
sacrificing young men's blood
red poppies wither
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vincent Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 4:19 AM
I have just stopped by to say congrats upon featuring among this week's poets
Austin Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 9:40 AM
The whither is very interesting. Really like this one. Love, daver
Meade Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 4:24 PM
I loved your haiku, I see warriors defending, bright red colors -- blood and poppies, season changing -- death but still life and fighting to come . . I have been rearranging your words -- they are powerful! Great job.
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